Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be improved by making it more concise, using correct tense and phrasing, and adding one specific supporting detail. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "at a time") and correct collocation errors ("I usually worked" for past habits). Use a linking word to connect reason and feeling.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one. I usually took the bus to school, so I sometimes felt jealous when my friends rode their bikes; it seemed faster and more fun.

제안: This answer is very short and ungrammatical. Give a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct the structure (e.g., "Bikes are quite popular in my country") and provide examples or reasons why (commuting, fitness, infrastructure).

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short commutes because bike lanes and affordable bike-sharing systems make cycling convenient and economical.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one at a time.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one at that time.

The phrase 'at a time' is incorrect in this context. The correct expression is 'at that time' to refer to a past period. Use 'that' to specify the time being discussed. Suggestion: replace 'at a time' with 'at that time' to convey the intended meaning.

× I usually work or use public transport to get around, and sometimes I felt a bit jealous of friends who could ride to school.

✓ I usually worked or used public transport to get around, and sometimes I felt a bit jealous of friends who could ride to school.

The sentence mixes present simple 'I usually work' with past 'felt'. The question asks about having a bike when the student was a child, so the actions should be in the past. Change present tense verbs 'work' and 'use' to past 'worked' and 'used' for tense consistency. Suggestion: keep verbs in the past when describing past habits.

× Yes, in my country take a bike is more popular.

✓ Yes, in my country taking a bike is more popular.

The structure 'take a bike' is not correctly formed as a noun phrase; the gerund 'taking' is needed to act as the subject. Alternatively, use 'riding a bike is more popular' for clarity. Also, the comparative 'more popular' should have a reference (more popular than what), but in spoken English it's acceptable to imply 'than other transport methods.' Suggestion: use 'taking a bike' or better 'riding a bike' when describing a common activity.