Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接且简短，但过于简单，缺乏细节和扩展。按照评分规则应有主题句并适当补充细节（如什么时候、有何用途、感受或例子）。可以用连接词自然延展，使答案更丰富且长度不超5句。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, which I used to ride to my friend's house every afternoon. It helped me gain confidence and independence, and I remember practicing tricks with my brother on weekends.

제안: 答案含糊且有语音填充词（uh），句子不够清晰，且有语法和用词错误（'ride back'不合适）。应直接给出观点，然后用具体原因或例子支持观点，使用连接词如 'however' 或 'but' 来衔接对比。保持句子流畅并避免填充词。

예시: I think bicycles are fairly popular in the country overall; many people use them in rural areas for short trips. However, in my city fewer people cycle because public transport is convenient and the roads can be unsafe for cyclists.

× Maybe it's popular in my country, but in my city, uh, less people, uh, ride back.

✓ Maybe they're popular in my country, but in my city, fewer people ride bikes.

句子中存在代词和数量词用法不当。英文中“bikes”是复数名词，前文用代词应与之保持一致，不能用“it's”（it is，指单数）来指代复数名词，正确应为“they're”。另外，“less people”在表达可数名词的减少时应使用“fewer”而非“less”。“ride back”不是固定搭配；根据语境应使用“ride bikes”。建议：1) 当指代复数名词时使用复数代词（they/them/they're）；2) 可数名词的数量减少用“fewer”，不可数名词用“less”；3) 常用搭配为“ride bikes”。