Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Chú ý ngữ pháp cơ bản (thì và số ít/ số nhiều), sửa phát âm/ từ sai, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu. Cụ thể: dùng 'I had' hoặc 'I used to have' (không dùng 'I were'), nói rõ và gọn lý do tại sao nó đắt (ví dụ: màu sắc, chất lượng), loại bỏ tiếng lấp đầy (uh) và hoàn thành câu. Cố gắng dùng 2–4 câu tự nhiên, có câu chủ đề và chi tiết bổ trợ.

예시: Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child. It was a pink bike that my mother bought for me. I remember it felt special because of its bright colour and sturdy frame, so it was quite expensive at the time.

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp (đại từ, thì, danh từ số ít/ nhiều) và cấu trúc câu để trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng. Tránh câu dài lủng củng; dùng liên từ phù hợp để nối ý (for example, because, therefore). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (thống kê, ví dụ) để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn. Giữ tối đa 4 câu.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. Many children learn to ride a bike as their first form of transportation, so almost everyone knows how to cycle. For example, I learned to ride when I was six and used a bike to go to school and visit friends.

× Yes, I used to have a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child.

'Were' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires the singular past form 'was'. Use 'was' for first-person singular in past tense. Suggestion: remember 'I was', 'he/she/it was', 'we/you/they were'.

× I remember it was a pink pie, a pink bike and my mother bought it for me.

✓ I remember it was a pink bike, and my mother bought it for me.

'Pie' is a wrong lexical choice (probably a slip) and repetition 'a pink bike' is redundant. Replace 'pie' with 'bike' and join clauses with 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: check word choice and avoid unnecessary repetition.

× It was so expensive that time because of the uh, like the colour and the.

✓ It was so expensive at that time because of the colour.

Phrase 'that time' should be 'at that time'. The filler 'uh, like the' and dangling 'and the.' create an incomplete sentence. Simplify to 'because of the colour' or specify the reason fully. Suggestion: avoid fillers and finish the thought.

× Well, I think bikes are popular in my country because every children have their own life and the first vehicles that we have to practice when we grow up is that I had to ride a bike.

✓ Well, I think bikes are popular in my country because every child has their own life, and the first vehicle we practice on when we grow up is the bicycle.

Multiple errors: 'every children' should be 'every child' (singular after 'every'); 'have' should be 'has' for third-person singular; 'vehicles' should be singular 'vehicle' to match 'the first'; awkward clause 'is that I had to ride a bike' corrected to 'is the bicycle'. Maintain present tense for general statements. Suggestion: use 'every' with singular nouns and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Therefore everyone in the country know how to ride by and board bike.

✓ Therefore everyone in the country knows how to ride a bicycle.

Subject-verb agreement: 'everyone' is singular and needs 'knows' (see previous item) (this also maps to subject-verb agreement). 'ride by and board bike' is ungrammatical word order and unclear vocabulary. Use 'ride a bicycle' or 'ride bikes'. Suggestion: use 'everyone knows' and a clear verb phrase 'ride a bicycle'.