Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and natural: remove filler words (uh), correct grammar (use past tense consistently), and combine sentences into a clear short answer with one supporting detail. Add a linking word if including an extra detail. Also limit to maximum five sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my house and through the neighborhood with my friends, which was how we spent our afternoons.

제안: Give a direct, concise opinion and support it with a specific reason or example. Avoid vague expressions like “5050” and fillers such as “uh.” Use linking words (however, because) to make your response coherent and provide one clear supporting detail.

예시: I think bikes are not very popular in my country because many people prefer motorcycles or cars for convenience. However, bicycles are becoming more common in some cities for short trips and exercise.

× 'I love uh. Riding in around house and neighborhood with my friends.'

✓ 'I loved riding around the house and the neighborhood with my friends.'

'Love' is present tense while the context is past (when you were a child). Use past tense 'loved'. Also correct word order and articles: remove incorrect period after uh, use 'riding around' (not "riding in around"), add 'the' before 'house' and 'neighborhood' to specify known places.' Suggestion: Use past tense verbs to match time frame and keep word order: subject + verb + adverb/prepositional phrase.'

× 'I love uh. Riding in around house and neighborhood with my friends.'

✓ 'I loved riding around the house and the neighborhood with my friends.'

'In around' is incorrect. The correct phrasal preposition is 'around' to indicate movement in the area. Also add 'the' before 'house' and 'neighborhood' because you refer to specific places from the speaker's childhood.'

× 'I love uh. Riding in around house and neighborhood with my friends.'

✓ 'I loved riding around the house and the neighborhood with my friends.'

Missing definite articles before 'house' and 'neighborhood' make the sentence unnatural. Use 'the house' and 'the neighborhood' when referring to specific known places. Also ensure tense consistency as noted earlier.'

× 'Exactly 5050 I think. Uh, riding bicycle is not popular. In my country.'

✓ 'It's exactly fifty-fifty, I think. Uh, riding bicycles is not popular in my country.'

'Exactly 5050' is informal and should be written as 'exactly fifty-fifty' or 'about fifty-fifty'. 'Riding bicycle' is missing plural and article; use 'riding bicycles' or 'cycling' for general statements. Also combine the fragments into one sentence 'not popular in my country' rather than a sentence fragment.'

× 'Exactly 5050 I think. Uh, riding bicycle is not popular. In my country.'

✓ 'It's about fifty-fifty, I think. Uh, cycling is not very popular in my country.'

'5050' is a numeric informal quantifier. Use words like 'fifty-fifty' or 'about fifty-fifty' to clearly express a split opinion. Also adjust the following sentence to natural phrasing: 'cycling is not very popular in my country.'