Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a fuller response: start with a topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add 1–2 specific details. Use linking words if you add more than one detail. Avoid single-word answers.

예시: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it often around my neighborhood. For example, I used to cycle to the park every weekend with my younger sister.

제안: Improve grammar, coherence and specificity: begin with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details linked with words like 'because' and 'for example'. Correct subject-verb agreement and avoid redundancy. Keep it to 2–3 sentences total.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people learn to ride from a young age. For example, during holidays my friends and I often cycle along dedicated bike lanes to the park, which shows how common cycling is.

× Yes, I think bike are popular in our country because many people they know how to ride a bike and for example for the holidays we always will go to have a bike lane with our friends.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because many people know how to ride a bike, and, for example, on holidays we always go to a bike lane with our friends.

Multiple errors: (1) 'bike are' is a subject-verb agreement and singular/plural issue — use plural 'bikes are' to match subject (Grammar ID 27 and 1). (2) The phrase 'many people they know' has an unnecessary pronoun 'they' (incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12); remove 'they'. (3) 'for the holidays' is a preposition/article issue — more natural is 'on holidays' or 'during the holidays' (incorrect use of prepositions/articles, ID 11 and 22). (4) 'we always will go to have a bike lane' misuses future placement and verb phrasing (future tense issue, ID 7, and sentence structure, ID 26) — use 'we always go to a bike lane' for habitual action; do not use 'will' for habitual past/present. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree (bikes are), avoid redundant pronouns, choose correct preposition ('on holidays' or 'during the holidays'), and use simple present for habitual actions ('we always go').