Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Réponse en français (Canada) : Votre réponse est courte et contient des erreurs de grammaire (temps et négation). Pour améliorer, répondez directement avec une phrase au passé, puis ajoutez une ou deux raisons courtes et claires en utilisant des mots de liaison. Par exemple, commencez par « Non, je n'en avais pas quand j'étais enfant » puis expliquez pourquoi, en une ou deux phrases supplémentaires. Faites attention à l'accord des temps et à l'utilisation correcte de la négation.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I wasn't interested in cycling. Also, my parents thought it was safer to focus on other activities, so I mostly played indoor games.

제안: Réponse en français (Canada) : La réponse est compréhensible mais confuse et grammaticalement incorrecte. Améliorez la clarté en faisant une déclaration claire, puis en donnant une raison précise et un exemple si possible. Utilisez des mots de liaison comme « parce que » ou « par exemple ». Évitez les phrases mal formées et remplacez des mots incorrects (par ex. « back ») par le mot approprié (« bike » ou « bikes »).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work—it’s cheap and fast. For example, in cities you often see bike lanes and many commuters cycling during rush hour.

× No, I don't have because I don't like the bike.

✓ No, I didn't have one because I didn't like bikes.

ID 5: Past tense issue The student answers a question about the past ('when you were a child') but uses present tense verbs ('don't have', 'don't like'). Use past simple to match the time frame: 'didn't have' and 'didn't like'. Also replace 'the bike' with 'bikes' or 'one' for general reference. Suggestion: use past simple for past time expressions and choose appropriate noun reference ('one' for a specific bike or 'bikes' for the category).

× Yes, because the people like the back is say back is fast.

✓ Yes, because people say bikes are fast.

ID 12: Incorrect use of pronouns and ID 26: Sentence structure errors The sentence is ungrammatical and contains wrong words ('back' instead of 'bike') and awkward structure ('like the back is say back is fast'). Simplify: 'people say' (general subject) and use plural 'bikes are fast' to state the general opinion. Suggestion: use 'people' without 'the' for general statements, use the correct noun 'bike'/'bikes', and a simple clause 'people say X' for reported opinions.