Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the grammatical errors and make the answer more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I did.”), then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Avoid irrelevant words (you said “bag” instead of “bike”).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it with my siblings around our neighborhood. For example, we would race to the park every Saturday, which made biking a fun family activity.

제안: Make the answer more fluent and natural: give a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like “because” or “so” and avoid awkward phrases such as “third world country” (use “developing country” if needed). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because public transport is often unreliable and expensive. As a result, many people use bicycles for short trips and commuting. For instance, in my town you can see students and workers cycling to school or markets every day.

× Yes, I have a bag when I was a child and it was fun to ride a bike together with my siblings.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and it was fun to ride it with my siblings.

The student mixed present tense 'have' with past context 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'had' for possession in the past. Also 'a bag' is likely a typo for 'a bike'; corrected to 'a bike'. Use a pronoun 'it' to avoid repeating 'bike'. Add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Well, I grew up in a third world country in which transportation is quite inconvenient, so bike is, I would say popular to my country back then and until now.

✓ Well, I grew up in a third-world country where transportation was quite inconvenient, so bicycles were, I would say, popular in my country back then and still are now.

Multiple issues: 'third world' as a compound adjective should be hyphenated. Use 'where' rather than 'in which' for natural speech. 'Transportation was' matches past context. 'Bike' is countable and needs plural 'bicycles' when speaking generally, and the verb must agree: 'bicycles were'. 'Popular to my country' is incorrect preposition; use 'popular in my country'. 'Back then and until now' is awkward; use 'back then and still are now' to show continuity. Commas added for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 1