Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms. For example, say when you had the bike, describe it briefly, and explain why you stopped riding with a clear reason. Also keep answers under five sentences.

예시: Yes. I had a small red bike with training wheels when I was about four. However, I stopped riding it after one tire popped off, which made the bike unsafe. I remember my parents then bought me a scooter instead.

제안: Give a direct opinion first and then support it with specific observations and a linking word. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., ‘motorbikes’ or ‘cars’) and avoid vague phrasing. Mention any exceptions or reasons to make the answer more informative.

예시: Not really. In my area, most people travel by motorbikes or cars, so I rarely see bicycles on the roads. For example, commuters usually prefer motorbikes because they are faster and more convenient for short journeys.

× Yeah, yeah, it did.

✓ Yeah, yeah, I did.

The student used the pronoun 'it' incorrectly to refer to themselves. The correct subject pronoun for the speaker is 'I.' Use 'I did' to answer a past yes/no question about personal possession: 'Did you have a bike?' -> 'I did.' Suggestion: Replace 'it' with 'I' when referring to yourself in subject position.

× I used on this little red bike with training wheels at the back when I was like 4 years old and I stopped riding.

✓ I used to ride this little red bike with training wheels at the back when I was about 4 years old, and then I stopped riding.

The phrase 'used on' is incorrect. The correct expression for a past habitual action is 'used to' followed by the base verb: 'used to ride.' Also 'like 4 years old' is informal and should be 'about 4 years old.' Add 'then' or 'and then' to show sequence. Suggestion: Use 'used to' + base verb for past habits and replace 'like' with 'about' in formal speech.

× It's cause one of the tires popped off.

✓ It was because one of the tires popped off.

'It's cause' is an informal and ungrammatical contraction. The context is past ('I stopped riding'), so use past 'It was' and the conjunction 'because' to give the reason. Also 'popped off' is acceptable as past tense of a phrasal verb. Suggestion: Use proper connective 'because' and match tense ('was') to surrounding past narrative.

× I wouldn't say so.

✓ I wouldn't say so.

This sentence is grammatically correct and appropriately uses modal 'would' to express a tentative opinion. No correction needed.

× I don't usually see people using bikes in my neighborhood or on the streets.

✓ I don't usually see people riding bikes in my neighborhood or on the streets.

While 'using bikes' is understandable, the more natural collocation is 'riding bikes.' 'Using' with vehicles is less common than 'riding' or 'driving.' Suggestion: Use 'riding' with 'bikes' for natural phrasing.

× I usually see people on motorcycles like cars, not other bikes too.

✓ I usually see people on motorcycles or in cars, not on bikes.

The original sentence mixes categories unclearly: 'on motorcycles like cars' is confusing because cars are not ridden 'on.' Clarify by using 'on motorcycles' and 'in cars.' Also 'not other bikes too' is awkward; better is 'not on bikes.' Suggestion: Separate the two vehicle types and use correct prepositions: 'on' for motorcycles, 'in' for cars.