Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (tense and articles), use a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep answers natural and concise (max 5 sentences). For example, use past tense consistently: 'I didn't have a bike when I was young.' Add linking words like 'however' or 'so' and give a brief specific memory or frequency.

예시: I didn't have a bike when I was young, but my grandfather owned one, so I often borrowed it to explore our neighborhood. For example, I would ride to the small park near our house every Saturday, which helped me learn balance and feel independent.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve word choice and sentence structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific reasons or examples using linking words like 'because' or 'for example.' Use singular/plural correctly (e.g., 'a basic mode' or 'one of the basic modes').

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and practical for short trips. For example, many people ride bikes to work or to the market, especially in congested cities where driving a car would be slow and expensive.

× I don't own any bike when I was young but my grandfather has 1 so whenever I wanna bike I borrowed his and then explore our community using that bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was young, but my grandfather had one, so whenever I wanted to ride a bike I borrowed his and explored our community with it.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Use past tense for past situations: 'didn't have' instead of 'don't own', 'had' for grandfather, 'wanted' instead of 'wanna', 'ride' is the correct verb for using a bike, 'borrowed' and 'explored' should both be past tense to match. Also use 'one' instead of '1' and 'with it' for clarity. Suggestion: keep all verbs in past tense when describing past habits.'

× Bikes are actually popular popular in our country where I am.

✓ Bikes are actually very popular in my country.

The sentence repeats 'popular' twice (redundancy) and uses an awkward phrase 'in our country where I am.' Replace the duplicate with a single adjective and use 'in my country' for natural English. Add an intensifier like 'very' if emphasis is intended.'

× It is one of the basic mode of transportation used to move from one place to another.

✓ They are one of the basic modes of transportation used to move from one place to another.

'It' is incorrect because 'bikes' is plural, so use 'they.' Also 'one of the basic mode' is incorrect: use plural 'modes.' Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'They are one of the basic modes.' This fixes number agreement and article usage. Suggestion: match singular/plural forms between subject and predicate and use plural noun 'modes' with plural subject.'