Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, avoid grammar mistakes and irrelevant words, and keep answers natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense usage, and concise supporting detail. Use linking words (e.g., but, so) correctly and avoid unrelated verbs (e.g., 'write' seems wrong here). Aim for 2–3 sentences within the 5-sentence limit.

예시: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child. I usually borrowed my brother’s bike when I wanted to ride, so I learned to cycle around our neighborhood.

제안: Open directly and use clearer phrasing. Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'Very interesting question.' Give a concise general statement, then contrast with specific local reasons using linking words (e.g., however, because). Provide a concrete example of the lack of facilities to be more specific.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular across the country; many people use them for short trips and exercise. However, in my city cycling is less common because there are few bike lanes and limited places to park bikes, so people prefer cars or buses.

× No, I hadn't my own bike as a child, but whenever I wanted to write I always used to ask my brother because he has 1 and so I could walk and ride a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have my own bike as a child, but whenever I wanted to ride I always used to ask my brother because he had one, so I could sit on and ride his bike.

Errors: 'hadn't my own bike' is incorrect word order and auxiliary for possession in simple past; use 'didn't have'. 'Wanted to write' is likely a typo for 'wanted to ride' given context. 'He has 1' mixes present tense and a numeral; should be past tense 'he had one' to match past narrative and use the word 'one'. Also 'so I could walk and ride a bike' is unclear — 'walk' doesn't fit; corrected to 'sit on and ride his bike' or simply 'ride his bike'. Suggestions: use did + base verb for negation in simple past (didn't have), keep tense consistent (use past tense throughout when narrating childhood), replace numerals with words in speech, and ensure verbs match intended meaning (ride, not write).

× Very interesting question and I think overall among the country it is very widespread, but specifically in my city it is not that popular because in my town there are no facilities for cyclists.

✓ That's a very interesting question. I think bicycles are popular across the country overall, but in my city they are not that common because there are no facilities for cyclists in my town.

Errors: 'among the country' is incorrect preposition and phrasing; use 'across the country' or 'throughout the country'. 'It is very widespread' uses 'it' vaguely; specify 'bicycles' or 'they'. Inconsistent reference: 'in my city' and 'in my town' should be consistent and use plural for bicycles ('they are not that common'). Suggestions: use clear subjects (bicycles), consistent place terms, correct prepositions ('across' or 'throughout'), and maintain number agreement between subject and verb ('bicycles ... are').