Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with grammar, word choice and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details. Correct common errors: use 'I did' or 'Yes, I did' for short answers, say 'extra wheels' or 'training wheels', and use 'riding' instead of 'writing'. Also avoid repeating 'I had' twice; combine ideas for conciseness and natural flow.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small pink bike with training wheels when I was a child, which helped me learn to ride safely. I don’t own a bike now because I moved to the city and mostly use public transport.

제안: Avoid repetition and add one specific reason or example. Begin with a direct answer, then use a linking word (because, since, for example) and provide a concrete detail such as statistics, a location, or personal observation. Vary vocabulary (popular, common, widely used). Keep it to two or three sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many cities have dedicated cycle lanes and large parks for riding. For example, on weekends you can see whole families cycling along the riverfront.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The question uses past simple 'Did you have...?' which requires the short answer 'Yes, I did.' Using 'I had' repeats the main verb instead of using the auxiliary 'did'. Use the auxiliary for short answers to yes/no questions in past simple.

× I had a pink bike with a extra wheels to make the writing more easy.

✓ I had a pink bike with extra wheels to make riding easier.

Multiple issues: 'a extra wheels' is incorrect because 'wheels' is plural and should not have 'a' and 'extra' should directly modify the plural noun. 'the writing' is wrong context; the intended word is 'riding'. 'more easy' is non-idiomatic; use the comparative 'easier'. The correction removes the article before a plural noun, replaces the wrong noun, and uses the correct comparative adverb.

× But I don't have a bike anymore.

✓ But I don't have a bike anymore.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses present simple correctly to state a current fact, so no change is needed.

× Yes, I think so because in my country there's a lot of parks and places to ride a bicycle, so I think bikes are pretty popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think so because in my country there are a lot of parks and places to ride bicycles, so I think bikes are pretty popular.

'There's a lot of parks' is incorrect because 'there's' (there is) should be 'there are' for the plural noun 'parks' (There be issue / subject-verb agreement). Also 'a lot of parks' pairs with plural 'parks' and 'a bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' when speaking generally. Finally, repeating 'in my country' is redundant; removing the repetition improves style.