Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy, answer directly with a clear past-tense topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and avoid vague words like 'apparently'. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use a linking word if adding detail.

예시: No, I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. Instead, I often borrowed my cousin’s bicycle to practice on weekends, and that helped me learn balance quickly.

제안: Start with a concise opinion sentence, then give two clear, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, for example). Correct singular/plural and avoid repeating words. Keep sentences short and coherent.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work. For example, in cities you can see commuters cycling on dedicated lanes, and children often ride bikes in parks after school.

× Apparently no, I don't have.

✓ Apparently not, I didn't.

The student used 'no' incorrectly after 'Apparently' and the present tense 'don't have' conflicts with the past-time question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. Use 'not' to negate 'apparently' and change the verb to past tense 'didn't' to match the question's past time frame. Suggestion: say 'Apparently not' or 'No, I didn't.'

× However, I just used the bicycle of my cousin to practice.

✓ However, I just used my cousin's bicycle to practice.

'The bicycle of my cousin' is an unnatural prepositional phrase in English; possessive form 'my cousin's bicycle' is preferred. Also the question refers to a past habit, so past simple 'used' is acceptable, but 'just' can imply recent action; if speaker means 'I used to use' for repeated past action, it should be 'I used my cousin's bicycle to practice' or 'I used to use my cousin's bicycle to practice.' Suggestion: use possessive form and choose the correct past expression ('used' for a specific past event, 'used to' for habitual past).

× Yes, I do believe that bicycle is very popular in our country because it is widely used of a lot of people in our country going going to their job and for the and for the kids to practice it.

✓ Yes, I believe that bicycles are very popular in our country because they are widely used by many people to go to their jobs and for kids to practice riding them.

Multiple issues: 'that bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' when speaking generally (article error / singular-plural). 'I do believe' is grammatical but 'I believe' is more natural. 'is widely used of a lot of people' is incorrect preposition and wording; use 'are widely used by many people'. Repetition 'going going' and extra 'the and for the' are errors in sentence structure. 'To their job' should be pluralized to 'to their jobs' or 'to get to work'. For children, use 'kids to practice riding them' to clarify the activity and match plural subject. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements, 'by' for agent with 'used', and simplify sentence structure.