Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不自然且信息不足。時態使用錯誤（兒時應用過去式），內容過於簡短且缺乏支持細節。回答應直接回應問題並給出一到兩個具體細節，使用連接詞使語流更順暢。建議：1) 使用正確時態（過去式）2) 開頭一句明確回答問題3) 加入1–2個具體細節（例如誰給的、什麼樣的自行車或最喜歡的活動）4) 使用連接詞（because/so/and）連接想法。

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to school and visit my friends. Because it was light and easy to handle, I learned to ride quickly and felt very independent.

제안: 回答直接但過於簡短且缺乏支持理由或例子。應在宣稱後提供具體原因或例子來豐富內容，並使用連接詞使語句連貫。建議：1) 保持主句直接回答2) 加1–2個具體原因或例子（例如上班族騎行、城市共享單車）3) 使用連接詞（for example/so/because）來組織語句。

예시: Yes, they are. For example, many people use bicycles for short commutes and there are numerous bike-sharing programs in major cities, so cycling is a common and convenient way to get around.

× Yes, I have a bike. When I'm tired, it's very good.

✓ Yes, I had a bike. It was very useful when I was tired.

原句时态使用不一致且与提问的过去时间背景不符。考官问的是过去（"Did you have a bike when you were a child?"），学生回答应使用过去时。原句“Yes, I have a bike.”使用现在时，需改为过去时“had”。此外句子“When I'm tired, it's very good.”混合现在时和指代不明确的“it”，并且表述不自然。根据上下文应改为过去时并明确指代："It was very useful when I was tired." 建议：在回答关于过去的提问时，全句使用过去时；避免模糊的代词，明确说明物品的作用。