Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and add a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then give one specific detail (who it belonged to, how you used it, or what you enjoyed). Use linking words if you add a second sentence.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it every afternoon to ride around my neighborhood.

제안: Answer directly and use a reason or example to support your view. Begin with a clear opinion, then use linking words (because, because of, for example) to give a specific reason or example about popularity (e.g., commuting, affordability, geography). Keep it to one or two sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Sri Lanka because many people use motorbikes and bicycles for daily commuting due to their low cost and ability to navigate busy streets; for example, students and delivery riders often rely on them.

× Yes, I have bike when my earlier.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was younger.

Problems: 1) Past tense issue (ID 5): The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense 'had' rather than present 'have'. 2) Article errors (ID 22): 'bike' requires an article 'a bike'. 3) Sentence structure/time expression error (ID 26): 'when my earlier' is ungrammatical; the correct phrase is 'when I was younger' or 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs for past situations, include required articles before singular countable nouns, and use correct time-expression phrases such as 'when I was younger' or 'when I was a child'.

× Yes, my country is Sri Lanka. Then my country is popular to bike.

✓ Yes, my country is Sri Lanka. Bicycles are popular in my country.

Problems: 1) Sentence structure errors (ID 26): The second sentence 'Then my country is popular to bike' is ungrammatical and unclear. 2) Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11): 'popular to bike' is incorrect; the correct preposition with 'popular' is 'in' (popular in my country). 3) Article/word choice errors (ID 22/13): 'my country is popular to bike' misuses 'popular' as if the country performs the action; instead say 'Bicycles are popular in my country' or 'Cycling is popular in my country'. Suggestion: Rephrase to make the subject the thing that is popular (bicycles or cycling) and use the preposition 'in' to indicate location.