Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は主題に触れていますが、文法・語彙の誤りが多く、論理のつながりも不十分です。改善点：1) 明確なトピック文（短く直接的）を使う。2) 理由は順序立てて、接続詞（firstly、secondly、becauseなど）を正しく使う。3) 単語の選び方を正す（bank daughter→bicycle／room→road／bound→hitなど）。4) 文は5文以内に収め、自然な表現を心がける。例文を暗記し、自分の状況に合わせて語彙を入れ替える練習をする。

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents didn’t allow me to ride one for two main reasons. Firstly, they thought the roads were too busy and it would be unsafe for a child. Secondly, buying and maintaining a bicycle seemed expensive to them. So I grew up without learning to cycle.

제안: 回答は意見を述べていますが、文法や語彙の誤用、論理のつながりの不備が目立ちます。改善点：1) まず簡潔なトピック文で意見を示す（Yes/No + reason）。2) 理由は2つ程度に絞り、接続詞（because, firstly, secondly）でつなぐ。3) 単語の誤用を直す（banks→bikes、Rd.→roads、run safety→ride safely、difficult→inconvenient）。4) 具体例（狭い道、自転車盗難、駐輪場不足など）を1つ加えると説得力が増します。

예시: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in Japan. Firstly, many streets are narrow, which makes cycling feel unsafe. Secondly, owning a bike can be costly and finding secure parking is difficult. For example, in my city there are few safe bike lanes and many people prefer public transport instead.

× No I did not. My father prohibited me to have a bank daughter. The reason behind that this room was 2. Firstly, there are risks to ensure the car driver cannot bound bike rider secondary is expensive.

✓ No, I did not. My father prohibited me from having a bike. The reasons were: first, there were safety risks because car drivers might not be able to avoid bike riders; second, bikes were expensive.

文の誤りは主に動詞の使い方と前置詞、文構造にあります。'prohibited me to have' は不正確で、正しくは 'prohibit someone from doing' です。目的語の形式も 'having a bike' のように動名詞が必要です。'bank daughter' は誤字で 'bike' と推測されます。'The reason behind that this room was 2.' は意味不明瞭で文構造エラーです。複数の理由を列挙する場合は 'The reasons were:' のように導入し、列挙ごとに明確な文にします。'there are risks to ensure the car driver cannot bound bike rider' は語順と語彙選択が不適切で、'car drivers might not be able to avoid bike riders' のように表現します。時制は質問が過去についてなので過去形を使用します。改善のために: 1) 'prohibit someone from doing' 構文を覚える。2) 動名詞を目的語に使う（having）。3) 理由を述べる際は 'First,... Second,...' として各理由を完全な文にする。4) 誤字を避けるため単語を確認する。

× In my opinion, no I don't there are less popular to ride a bike in Japan. It is because there are narrow Rd. so that banks cannot run safety and they are expensive in purchasing bike and difficult.

✓ In my opinion, no, I don't. Riding bikes is less popular in Japan. This is because the roads are narrow, so bikes cannot be used safely, they are expensive to buy, and riding is difficult.

ここでは冠詞、複数形、前置詞、語順の誤りがあります。'there are less popular to ride a bike' は文法的に間違っており、'Riding bikes is less popular in Japan' のように動名詞主語または 'Bicycles are less popular' と表現します。'Rd.' は 'roads' と綴り、可算名詞なので複数形と定冠詞/不定冠詞の扱いに注意します。'banks cannot run safety' は誤りで、文脈から 'bikes cannot be used safely' と言うべきです。'they are expensive in purchasing bike and difficult' は 'expensive to buy' と 'difficult to ride' のように不定詞で目的を表します。改善のために: 1) 動名詞 (Riding bikes) と名詞複数形 (roads, bikes) の使い分けを練習する。2) 'safe' と 'safely' のような形容詞/副詞の区別に注意する。3) 'expensive to buy' 'difficult to ride' のように意味が明確になる不定詞表現を使う。