Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Correct factual errors (e.g., "party" → "bike") and avoid filler words. Keep to a maximum of 3–5 sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "training wheels", "neighborhood", "practicing").

예시: Yes. I had a small red bike with training wheels that my parents gave me for my fifth birthday. I spent many afternoons riding it around our neighborhood, which helped me learn to balance and gain confidence. By the time I was seven, I could ride without the training wheels.

제안: Answer directly, then provide two specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar and word order, avoid repetition, and use linking phrases (e.g., "because", "for example", "as a result"). Be specific about who uses bikes and where infrastructure exists. Keep responses to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular. Many people use bicycles to commute to work or school because they are cheap and convenient. For example, some cities have been developing bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes, which has encouraged more people to cycle.

× Yes, I had a party when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child.

The original sentence uses 'had a party' which is likely a lexical error rather than grammatical; however it conflicts with the question about owning a bike. Change to 'had a bicycle' to correctly answer the question in the past tense. Use past simple 'had' to match 'when I was a child.' Suggestion: keep past simple for past possessions.

× It is a small rap bicycle with the training wheels that my parents bought me on my 5th birthday.

✓ It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my 5th birthday.

Several issues: tense should be past ('was') to match 'when I was a child'; 'rap' is incorrect adjective likely intended as 'red'; 'the training wheels' is acceptable but 'training wheels' without 'the' is more natural here; use 'bought me for my 5th birthday' rather than 'on' is acceptable but 'for' is more natural. Correction keeps past tense consistency and fixes incorrect adjective.

× I spent a countless afternoon and riding it around our neighborhood.

✓ I spent countless afternoons riding it around our neighborhood.

Problems: 'spent' requires a time expression plus gerund without conjunction: 'spent countless afternoons riding...'. 'A countless afternoon' is ungrammatical; use plural 'countless afternoons'. Remove 'and' before 'riding' because 'spent ... riding' is the correct pattern. This keeps past tense consistent.

× Uh, that's which helped me get.

✓ Uh, that helped me a lot.

Original is ungrammatical: 'that's which helped me get' is incorrect structure. Use simple past 'that helped me' to refer back to previous clause. Add 'a lot' or a specific result for clarity. Keep tense consistent.

× Yes, bicycles are popular in my country because so many people will use them to commute to work or school.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work or school.

The use of 'will use' is inappropriate here; a general truth or habitual action should use the simple present 'use'. Remove 'so' before 'many' for naturalness. Keep present tense to describe current habits.

× In some cities will develop develop bike lanes.

✓ Some cities have developed bike lanes.

Original lacks a proper subject-verb order and repeats 'develop'. For existing infrastructure use present perfect 'have developed' or simple present 'have' depending on meaning. 'Some cities have developed bike lanes' clearly states the fact. If meaning future, use 'Some cities are developing bike lanes.'

× Make cycling.

✓ This encourages cycling.

'Make cycling' is an incomplete imperative without a clear subject; it is unclear what 'make' refers to. Rephrase to 'This encourages cycling' or 'This makes cycling safer' to express the intended result. Use full clause to fit conversation context.