Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, avoid hesitations and repetition, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., because, so, although) and give a short reason or example. Also correct small grammar issues (use past tense consistently and say “rarely rode” rather than “rarely ride”).

예시: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child, but I rarely rode it because it was too big for me. As a result, I preferred walking to nearby places, and I only used the bike on weekends when my father adjusted the seat.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and then give specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (plural forms and articles) and avoid trailing off. Mention concrete examples or comparisons (urban vs neighborhood) and end with a short conclusion. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in quiet neighborhoods and smaller towns. People often cycle for short trips to shops or schools because it is cheap and convenient. However, in busy city centres with heavy traffic, many people avoid cycling for safety reasons, so usage depends on the area.

× Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child, but I rarely ride it because it's kind of big, uh too big for my age.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child, but I rarely rode it because it was kind of big, too big for my age.

The sentence mixes past habitual 'used to have' with present simple 'rarely ride' and present 'it's', causing tense inconsistency (Present tense issue ID 6). Also 'ride' should agree with the past context (Subject-verb agreement ID 27). Use past simple 'rode' and 'was' to keep the time frame consistent. Suggestion: keep all verbs that refer to childhood in the past tense.

× At that time. I was like free, but the bike, it's kind of big, so I don't really like, I, I don't really ride that much.

✓ At that time I felt free, but the bike was kind of big, so I didn't really like it and I didn't ride it much.

Original has a fragment 'At that time.' and colloquial filler 'I was like free' which is ungrammatical in formal structure (Sentence structure errors ID 26). Tense should remain past ('was' -> 'felt', 'didn't really like', 'didn't ride'). Remove fillers and combine clauses with correct punctuation. Suggestion: use 'felt free' for past feeling and use past negatives 'didn't'.

× I think bike is quite popular in my countries.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in my country.

'Bike' needs plural 'bikes' when speaking generally (Singular and plural issue ID 1). 'My countries' is incorrect if referring to one country; use 'my country' (Article errors ID 22 / word choice). Also adjust verb 'are' to agree with plural subject. Suggestion: use plural noun for general statements and correct possessive noun phrase.

× People most of the time ride it to go somewhere else, but mostly when you are in quite a quiet neighborhood.

✓ Most of the time people ride bikes to go somewhere, but mainly when they are in quite a quiet neighborhood.

Using 'ride it' is incorrect because 'it' is unclear; use plural 'bikes' for general reference (Article errors ID 22 / Singular/plural ID 1). Also shift 'you are' to general 'they are' to match general statement and ensure subject-verb agreement (Subject-verb agreement ID 27). Suggestion: use 'Most of the time people ride bikes' and use 'they' for general people.

× But on the big Rd. where the traffic are so noisy and hectic, people rare rarely ride a bike because there's.

✓ But on the big road where the traffic is so noisy and hectic, people rarely ride bikes because of that.

'Traffic' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is' (Subject-verb agreement ID 27). 'Rd.' should be written as 'road' and 'rare rarely' is a typo; use 'rarely'. 'Ride a bike' is acceptable but 'ride bikes' fits generalization. The sentence ends abruptly 'because there's' which is incomplete; complete it as 'because of that' or 'because of the traffic.' Suggestion: use 'traffic is', remove duplicate words and finish the clause with a clear noun phrase such as 'because of the traffic.'