Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Старайтесь давать грамматически правильные предложения и отвечать прямо на вопрос. Начните с простого тематического предложения в правильном времени (прошедшем), затем при необходимости добавьте одно-два поясняющих предложения. Избегайте междометий вроде «uh» и исправьте порядок слов и формы глагола: скажите «I didn’t have a bike when I was a child» или «I had a bike when I was a child».

예시: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. However, I remember occasionally borrowing my friend’s bike to ride around the neighborhood, which helped me learn balance and coordination.

제안: Отвечайте ясно и стройно: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте связное объяснение с конкретикой. Используйте связующие слова (because, so, for example) и корректные грамматические формы. Избегайте повторов и неоконченных фраз. Например: «Yes, they are popular because many people use them for exercise and commuting.»

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for exercise and short commutes. For example, it’s common to see people cycling in parks in the morning and students riding bikes to school to save time and money.

× When I was child, uh, I don't have bike.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

The sentence has multiple issues: missing article before 'child' and 'bike', incorrect tense and auxiliary choice. Use the past simple negative 'didn't have' to match the past time 'When I was a child'. Add the indefinite article 'a' before countable nouns 'child' and 'bike'. Suggestion: say 'When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.' to be grammatically correct and natural.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in my country lived many sport people, people who. Who go to sport and train?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many sportspeople in my country go training and do sports.

The original contains incorrect word order and tense: 'lived' (past) conflicts with present-tense 'are popular' and 'I think'. Use present simple 'go' and 'do' to describe habitual actions. 'Many sport people' is not natural; use 'many sportspeople' or 'many people who do sports'. Also combine fragmented clauses into one sentence and avoid sentence fragments like 'people who. Who go to sport and train?'. Suggestion: 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many sportspeople go training and do sports.'