Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar (tense consistency and articles), shorten and make answer more natural, and add one specific detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using a linking word. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms (use past tense for childhood).

예시: No, I didn’t have my own bike as a child, but my cousin owned one and taught me how to ride it. For example, he would push me along the park every weekend until I could balance and pedal on my own.

제안: Make the answer more concise and natural, fix grammar and word choice, and add one specific supporting reason or brief comparison. Start with a direct opinion, then use a linking word to provide a clear reason with a concrete example.

예시: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people use jeepneys or cars for daily travel. For instance, in the city it’s hard to cycle because roads are crowded and there are few dedicated bike lanes.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child, but I learned how to ride a bike because of my cousin.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I learned how to ride a bike because of my cousin.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'didn't have' to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: keep all verbs referring to past events in past tense (didn't have, learned).

× He was the one who has a bike and he was also the one who taught me how to ride 1.

✓ He was the one who had a bike and he was also the one who taught me how to ride.

After 'was the one who' the verb should match the past time reference; 'has' is present tense and should be 'had'. Also remove the stray '1'. Ensure verbs referring to past events use past tense (had, taught).

× So even without the bike, I was able to experience riding a bike when I was a child.

✓ So even without my own bike, I was able to ride a bike when I was a child.

Phrase 'experience riding a bike' is wordy and slightly awkward; 'ride a bike' is clearer. Also specify 'my own bike' to clarify possession. Maintain past tense for consistency.

× No, I don't think so, because in our country the motive, the main mode of transportation here is through jeepneys and sometimes there are also people who own cars and we don't normally see bike as a commute to everyday.

✓ No, I don't think so, because in our country the main mode of transportation is jeepneys, and sometimes people own cars, so we don't normally see bikes used for everyday commuting.

Several tense and usage issues: 'the motive' is incorrect word choice and unnecessary; use 'main mode of transportation'. Remove redundant 'here'. 'We don't normally see bike' uses singular 'bike' where plural 'bikes' is needed. 'Commute to everyday' is incorrect; use 'used for everyday commuting' or 'for daily commutes'. Keep present tense because speaker is describing current general situation.