Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sửa ngữ pháp (thì, mạo từ, động từ), sắp xếp ý mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ/tiếng ấp úng. Cụ thể: (1) Dùng thì quá khứ đúng cho hành động trong quá khứ; (2) Sử dụng mạo từ và tính từ đúng (a pink bike, with stickers); (3) Giữ độ dài hợp lý (tối đa 3–4 câu) và dùng liên từ thích hợp để nối ý (for example, then, so); (4) Thêm chi tiết cụ thể thay vì chung chung (where you rode, how often, who with).

예시: I did. When I was a child my mother bought me a small pink bike with cheerful stickers, and I loved it. After school I often rode it to the corner shop to buy snacks for my mother, and sometimes I cycled with my friends in the park.

제안: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh tiếng ấp úng. Nên đưa lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ hoặc so sánh. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (No, bikes are not very common); (2) Giải thích lý do với liên từ hợp lý (because, so); (3) Thêm ví dụ hoặc so sánh (e.g., motorbikes are cheaper/faster); (4) Sử dụng từ vựng chính xác (public transport, motorcycles, commute).

예시: No, I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer motorbikes or cars for commuting. For example, motorbikes are faster and more convenient in heavy traffic, and many cities also have reliable buses and metro systems.

× it's color pink

✓ its color was pink

Sentence uses incorrect contraction 'it's' (it is) instead of the possessive 'its' and wrong verb form for past context. Use 'its' to show possession and 'was' because the context is past: 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: use 'its color was pink' or 'it was pink'.

× it's have some sticker on it

✓ it had some stickers on it

Using 'it's have' is incorrect: 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' and cannot pair with 'have'. Also subject-verb agreement and tense: the context is past, so use 'it had'. 'Sticker' should be plural if there were multiple; use 'stickers' or 'a sticker' accordingly.

× and after school I usually umm you step by to go somewhere to buy some things for my mom or moreover, I will go to play with my.

✓ After school I usually stopped by to buy some things for my mom, or moreover, I would go to play with my friends.

Original sentence has unclear subject 'you' and missing object after 'play with my'. Tense inconsistency: recounting past habits should use past tense 'stopped by' or 'used to stop by' and 'would go to play'. Add the object 'friends' or appropriate noun. Remove filler words and clarify sequence.

× Umm, I think no, because, uh, in my country, umm, people often use motorbike to go somewhere like go to work or go to study at school and or some, uh, public transport like bus or umm, or metro.

✓ I don't think so, because in my country people often use motorbikes to get around, for example to go to work or to school, or use public transport like buses or the metro.

Use 'I don't think so' instead of 'I think no'. 'Motorbike' should be plural 'motorbikes' when speaking generally. Use 'get around' or 'go somewhere'. Use plural 'buses' and include definite article 'the metro' for a specific system. Maintain present simple for general truths.

× So it's not usually bike.

✓ So bicycles are not usually common.

'It's not usually bike' is ungrammatical. Use plural noun 'bicycles' or 'bikes' and present simple 'are not usually common' or 'aren't common'. Alternatively: 'So people don't usually ride bikes.'