Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Speak in the correct past tense and give a brief reason or extra detail. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Use a clear topic sentence followed by one supporting detail. For example, say you didn’t have a bike and explain why or what you used instead. Avoid tense errors like mixing present and past.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. Occasionally I borrowed a neighbour’s bike to ride in the park.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and specific supporting details connected with linking words. Use present simple for general facts, and explain reasons or examples succinctly. Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Keep length under five sentences and use connectors like 'because', 'for example', or 'also'.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for exercise and short trips. For example, young people often cycle in parks and along rivers on weekends, and some people prefer bikes to avoid traffic during rush hour.

× No, I don't have any bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Mixing present tense 'don't have' with past time expression 'when I was a child' is incorrect. Use past simple 'didn't have' for past situations. Also use the singular count noun with article 'a bike' rather than 'any bike' in a negative past statement. Suggestion: Use past simple consistently for past time references and include the appropriate article. Grammar problem type and ID: 5:Past tense issue; 1:Singular and plural issue; 22:Article errors.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because there are so many young people who love to cycling around the park when they are so boring.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because there are so many young people who love cycling around the park when they are bored.

Errors: 'love to cycling' mixes infinitive and gerund; use either 'love to cycle' or 'love cycling' (gerund). 'When they are so boring' misuses 'boring' (which describes something that causes boredom) instead of 'bored' (feeling). Also 'when' with this meaning is acceptable but 'when they are bored' is clearer. Suggestion: Use correct verb form after 'love' (gerund or 'to' + base verb) and use appropriate adjective 'bored' to describe people. Grammar problem type and ID: 8:Verb + -ing form; 13:Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs.

× Moreover, they also got they also.

✓ Moreover, they also get together to ride in groups.

Original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical ('they also got they also' repeats and lacks a verb meaning). 'Got' is incorrect form/context. I provided a correction that fits the context: young people also get together to ride in groups. Suggestion: Ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb, avoid repetition, and choose verbs that convey intended meaning (e.g., 'get together', 'ride'). Grammar problem type and ID: 26:Sentence structure errors; 6:Present tense issue.