Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise, correct small grammar errors, and add one specific detail to enrich the response. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it within about 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes — I had a small tricycle when I was a child. My father bought it for my sixth birthday, and because it had bright red paint I loved showing it to my friends, so we rode it together every afternoon.

제안: Make the response more natural and less blunt by using neutral phrasing, add a linking word, and include a specific example or reason beyond general poverty (e.g., traffic, short distances, or cycling culture). Avoid comparative errors like 'as compared to cars' — use 'compared with' or 'than'.

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they are much cheaper than cars and are practical for short trips. For example, many people use bikes to commute to local markets or get to work quickly when traffic is bad.

× Yes, I had a tricycle bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a tricycle bike when I was a child.

The sentence is missing the definite or indefinite article before the noun 'child'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article; here 'a child' is correct. Add 'a' to make the phrase grammatically correct: 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: include the article 'a' before 'child'.

× My father bought me that on my birthday.

✓ My father bought it for me on my birthday.

The original uses 'bought me that' which is unnatural: verbs like 'buy' take an object (bought it) and the recipient is expressed with a preposition 'for' (bought it for me). Also 'that' is less natural than 'it' referring to the tricycle. Correction: 'My father bought it for me on my birthday.' Suggestion: use 'bought it for me' to show the gift and recipient.

× It was a beautiful surprise and I used to ride it every day with my friends.

✓ It was a beautiful surprise and I used to ride it every day with my friends.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Used to' correctly expresses a habitual past action followed by the base verb 'ride'. No change needed. Suggestion: none.

× Yes, bikes are really popular in my country as they are quite cheap as compared to cars and there is a lot of poverty in the country.

✓ Yes, bikes are really popular in my country because they are much cheaper than cars, and there is a lot of poverty in the country.

Multiple issues: 'as compared to' is wordy and less natural; use 'cheaper than' for comparisons (comparison structure). 'As' at start of clause can be used but 'because' is clearer to express reason. Also 'quite cheap as compared to cars' should be 'much cheaper than cars' for natural comparative form. Finally, adding a comma before 'and' improves clarity. Suggestion: use 'because' for reasons and form comparisons as 'cheaper than'.