Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, clarity and natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct past tense and word order, and add one brief supporting detail. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words if adding details.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I often borrowed my friend’s bike to ride around the neighborhood, which helped me learn balance and confidence.

제안: Focus on accuracy and coherence. Use a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g., "ride" not "write"), and provide specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and keep responses concise (max five sentences).

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people ride bicycles to work because they are cheap and avoid traffic, and they are also good for short trips around the city.

× I didn't have a bike on, I was child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The student used incorrect preposition and omitted an article and connector for past time. Change 'on' to the conjunction 'when' to link two past-time clauses, and insert the article 'a' before 'child'. The sentence uses past simple, so keep 'didn't have' and 'was' for correct past tense. Suggestion: use 'when' to indicate time and include articles where needed.

× Yes, I think bikes are most popular in our country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in our country.

'Most popular' is a superlative implying comparison with all others; context calls for a simple degree. Use 'very popular' to state a high degree of popularity without comparing. Alternatively, use 'the most popular' if you mean they are the top mode of transport. Also include 'the' if using superlative about a specific category.

× It is also. Easy to write and go to the workplace even it's help help us.

✓ They are also easy to ride and to use for going to work because they help us.

The student used 'It' (singular) to refer to 'bikes' (plural) and fragmented the sentence. Replace with plural pronoun 'They'. 'Easy to write' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'ride'. 'Go to the workplace' is unnatural; use 'go to work'. 'Even it's help help us' contains wrong contraction and repeated word—use 'because they help us' to explain reason. Maintain present simple to state general facts.