Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and accurate: answer the question in a simple past tense and give a brief supporting detail. Correct grammatical mistakes (e.g., “job bicycle” is unclear). Keep to 1–3 sentences, with a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use linking words if adding more detail (e.g., “because,” “so”).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight because my parents wanted me to be active. It was lightweight and easy to ride, so I used it to visit friends and go to school.

제안: Avoid overgeneralisation and answer about your country specifically. Start with a clear topic sentence about your country, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “however”) to make the response coherent and natural. Keep responses to under five sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities, because many people use them to avoid traffic and save money. For example, commuters often cycle to work on dedicated bike lanes, and students ride bikes to school.

× Yes, I did. I do have a job bicycle.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bicycle.

The student’s reply mixes present-tense auxiliary 'do' with an odd noun phrase 'job bicycle' which is not standard English. The context asks about the past (when you were a child), so use past tense 'had'. Replace the incorrect phrase 'job bicycle' with 'bicycle'. Suggestion: match tense to the question (past), and use the simple noun 'bicycle' rather than 'job bicycle'. Note: This error falls under Sentence structure errors (ID 26) because the phrase 'job bicycle' is not a grammatical noun phrase and the auxiliary usage is inappropriate.

× Yes, bikes are popular in all countries and all over the world.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in many countries and around the world.

Saying 'in all countries' is an absolute statement that is likely inaccurate and stylistically odd. Use 'many countries' or 'in many places' to be natural and accurate. Also 'all over the world' is fine but more natural paired with 'around the world'. Suggestion: avoid absolute quantifiers like 'all' unless certain; use 'many' or 'in many countries' and prefer the collocation 'around the world'. This issue is best categorized as Incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14) and also relates to sentence wording (ID 26).