Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and use correct tense and article usage. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid filler sounds (mmm, uh) and repetition. For example, say whether you had a bike, then explain briefly why not with a clear reason and one supporting detail.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I lived in a hostel and bicycles were not allowed, so it wasn’t possible for me to own one. Besides, my parents preferred I use public transport for safety.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "landlocked country", "roads are narrow") and avoid repetition. Use one or two concrete examples or comparisons to strengthen your answer.

예시: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because it is landlocked and many towns have narrow roads. For example, in older city centers cars cannot pass easily, so people prefer bicycles for short trips and commuting to work.

× 'MMM well I I hadn't a bike when I was a child because I used to live in hostel and probably that time not allowed to get a bike.'

✓ 'MMM well I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I used to live in a hostel and probably at that time I was not allowed to get a bike.'

'Errors: incorrect verb form "hadn't" to express possession in simple past (should use did not have), missing article before "hostel" and missing subject+verb in "not allowed". Type matched: incorrect reflexive pronoun use was requested but actual errors are subject-verb and article usage; however per instruction only correct types in list — here correction addresses subject-verb and article. Suggestion: use did not (didn't) for past possession, include indefinite article "a" before countable nouns like "hostel", and supply a subject and verb for passive "was not allowed". Example improvement: "I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I lived in a hostel and at that time I was not allowed to have a bike.'

× 'Umm, yes, uh, in my point of view, the bike is most popular in my country because my country is land located country and the roadside is not that much big, big uh, However, the road is narrow, that's why my bicycle, uh, bicycle is more popular than other vehicles.'

✓ 'Umm, yes, in my point of view, bicycles are the most popular in my country because my country is a landlocked country and the roads are not very wide. However, the roads are narrow, so bicycles are more popular than other vehicles.'

'Errors corrected: subject-verb and noun number agreement (use plural "bicycles are"), article usage ("a landlocked country"), adjective order/choice ("landlocked" instead of "land located"), incorrect quantifier phrase "not that much big" changed to "not very wide", and repetition removed. Use present simple for general facts. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking about general popularity, include appropriate articles for singular countable nouns, and choose correct adjectives (landlocked) and natural adverb phrases (not very wide).'