Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and add one or two specific details. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and word order, and use a linking phrase if you add detail. Avoid redundancy (don’t repeat 'definitely' twice or mix present and past tense).

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my sister gave me when I was seven, and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, use more natural vocabulary (e.g. 'popular' not 'famous'), avoid repetition, and add a specific reason or example with a linking word. Also prefer concise phrases like 'in my country' once. Correct article and plurality errors.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheaper and easier to park than cars.

× When I was a child it was gifted me from my sister.

✓ When I was a child, it was gifted to me by my sister.

The original sentence uses passive voice with incorrect word order and missing preposition 'to' and wrong agent marker 'from'. In passive constructions the recipient is expressed with 'to' and the agent with 'by'. Also add a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: use 'it was gifted to me by my sister' or the active form 'My sister gifted it to me.' Grammar problem type ID:9

× I have a small bicycle.

✓ I had a small bicycle.

The question asks about having a bike when the student was a child (past time), so the verb should be in past tense. This is a tense mismatch rather than number, but the student used present 'have' instead of past 'had'. According to the provided list, this fits Past tense issue (ID 5) and Subject-verb agreement could apply; however, correct fix is to change tense to past. Suggestion: use 'I had a small bicycle.' Grammar problem type ID:5

× I think bikes are very famous in my country because most of the people like to travel by the bikes instead of the cars in my nation.

✓ I think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer to travel by bike rather than by car.

Multiple issues: 'famous' is not the usual adjective for common modes of transport; 'popular' fits better. Article use is wrong: do not use 'the' with general nouns like 'people', 'bikes', or 'cars' in this context. 'Travel by bike' and 'by car' are idiomatic; avoid 'the' and plural markers where unnecessary. Also 'prefer ... rather than ...' is a clearer comparative structure. Suggestion: use 'most people prefer to travel by bike rather than by car.' Grammar problem type ID:22