Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms (e.g. “I had a bike” or “I used to have a bike”), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it concise (no more than 4–5 sentences). For example, mention who it belonged to, where you rode it, and a short reason or memory. Avoid filler sounds like “umm.”

예시: Yes, I did. I had a red bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house after school. It was an old but reliable bike, so we often raced around the neighborhood for fun. Those afternoons helped me become more confident cycling on busy streets.

제안: Improve clarity and grammar: answer directly then give 2–3 specific reasons linked with connectors (for example, “because”, “also”, “for example”). Use accurate vocabulary (e.g. “popular”, “transportation”, “students”) and avoid repetition and fillers. Be specific about who uses bikes and why (commuters, students, people who exercise). Keep to 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for daily transportation and to save money on commuting. Also, they are common for exercise and leisure, especially among young people and students. For example, many university students cycle to class to avoid traffic and to stay fit.

× I had buy when I was a child.

✓ I bought one when I was a child.

The student used 'had buy', which mixes past perfect auxiliary 'had' with base verb 'buy'. The correct simple past form of 'buy' is 'bought' to describe a completed action in the past. Use 'bought' for a single past event: 'I bought one when I was a child.'

× I used to live it with my friend after school.

✓ I used to ride it with my friend after school.

The verb 'live' is incorrect here; the student likely means 'ride' (use a bike). Also 'used to' should be followed by the base verb, not an object-first structure. 'I used to ride it' correctly expresses a habitual past action. Ensure verb choice matches meaning and keep base verb after 'used to'.

× I think by salary popular into my country umm because many people use by umm for transportation, exercise and recreation and and then umm the student.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for transportation, exercise, recreation, and students do too.

Multiple issues: wrong prepositions ('by salary', 'into') and incorrect pronoun/reference. 'Popular in my country' uses 'in' not 'into'. 'Use them' refers back to 'bikes' (plural). 'By salary' is unclear and unnecessary; remove it. Also clarify the final clause: 'and students do too.' Revise sentence structure to a clear subject-verb order and correct prepositions/pronouns.