Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (past simple, possession) and avoid redundant fragments. For example, say you had a bike, describe it briefly (color, type), mention who bought it and one memorable moment, using connectors like "because" or "so".

예시: Yes, I did. My family bought me a bright red mountain bike when I was eight because I loved cycling. It was my favourite toy, and I often rode it to the park with my friends, which gave me many happy memories.

제안: Make your opinion clear first, then give specific reasons with linking words and correct vocabulary. Replace unclear phrases (e.g. "By King") with "Not really" or "I don't think so." Explain factors such as geography, infrastructure, or culture, and use connectors like "because", "since", or "therefore."

예시: Not really. I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because many towns are hilly and the roads are narrow, so cycling is difficult and unsafe. Therefore most people prefer cars or motorbikes for daily travel.

× When I was young, my family bought for me a super bike in the world because I liked it very much.

✓ When I was young, my family bought me the best bike in the world because I liked it very much.

The original sentence uses an incorrect verb pattern 'bought for me' and awkward noun phrase 'a super bike in the world.' Use the correct direct object construction 'bought me' (omit 'for') and a natural superlative phrase 'the best bike in the world.' This keeps past tense consistent and improves idiomatic expression.

× I have.

✓ I still have it.

The fragment 'I have.' lacks an object and is unnatural in this context. Expanding to 'I still have it.' supplies the missing object and clarifies meaning. This fixes sentence structure by providing a complete subject-verb-object unit.

× I have a good moment with it.

✓ I had many good moments with it.

The phrase 'a good moment' is incorrect because the speaker refers to repeated positive experiences in the past. Use the plural 'many good moments' and past tense 'had' to match 'When I was young.' This ensures agreement between tense and meaning and uses the correct noun form.

× By King not popular in my country because my country has a little bit of my town, so the site is uh, hard.

✓ Bicycles are not very popular in my country because many towns are small and the terrain is often difficult.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use ('By King'), missing subject, and awkward phrases ('has a little bit of my town', 'the site is uh, hard'). Replace with clear subject 'Bicycles are not very popular' and use plural noun 'many towns' and suitable noun 'terrain' to express difficulty. This corrects pronoun and noun usage and clarifies meaning.

× That's why the bike is not popular.

✓ That's why bikes are not popular.

The speaker discusses bicycles in general, so use the plural subject 'bikes' and plural verb agreement 'are not popular.' Changing 'the bike' to 'bikes' ensures subject-verb agreement and generalizes the statement appropriately.