Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and incorrect words. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No) and give a brief supporting detail. Keep it natural and concise, use correct verb tense and pronouns. For example, say whether you had a bike, when you got it, who gave it to you, or a short memory about riding it. Use linking words if you add more than one detail.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was six, and I learned to ride it in the park near our house. Because the park was quiet, I felt confident practicing every afternoon.

제안: Your answer communicates the main idea but is short, informal, and has minor grammatical issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, expand with 1–2 specific reasons and link them with conjunctions or transitional phrases. Use plural or singular agreement correctly (e.g., 'they are' or 'a bike is') and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Firstly, many people use them for short commutes because they can be faster than cars in heavy traffic. Moreover, cycling is eco-friendly and inexpensive, so it appeals to students and commuters alike.

× They should have a bite when you were a child.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the wrong pronoun 'They' and the wrong verb phrase 'should have a bite'. The question asked about the student's past possession, so the correct subject is 'I' and the simple past 'had' matches the past-time frame 'when I was a child'. Also 'bite' is a misspelling of 'bike'. Suggestion: use the first-person singular pronoun 'I' for personal experience, use 'had' for possession in the past, and correct 'bite' to 'bike'.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because uh, it can save time. Eco friendly.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they can save time and are eco-friendly.

The student used 'it' to refer to 'bikes', which is plural; the correct pronoun is 'they' and verbs must agree with the plural subject ('can save', 'are eco-friendly'). Also the fragment 'Eco friendly.' should be combined into the sentence as 'are eco-friendly' with a hyphen. Suggestion: match pronoun and verb number with the plural noun, and avoid sentence fragments by combining related thoughts.