Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and irrelevant phrasing. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), then give one or two clear supporting details using linking words. Be specific about reason and a short consequence. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid incorrect verb forms and mixed vocabulary.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment and my parents thought it was unsafe for me to ride on busy streets, so they never bought one for me. As a result, I never learned to ride until I was older.

제안: Your response communicates an idea but has many vocabulary and grammar mistakes and is repetitive. Begin with a clear opinion sentence, then add specific reasons and an example using linking words (for example, however, because). Use correct words (e.g., "bikes" not "bites" or "heights"). Keep answers concise and coherent.

예시: Bikes were more popular in my country a few decades ago, but they are less common now. This is mainly because public transport has improved and more people can afford cars. For example, I used to see many cyclists on market days, but nowadays I only see a few on weekends.

× No, I did not have applied when I was a child and so as a result I don't know how to write about.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, and as a result I don't know how to ride one.

Multiple errors: wrong verb 'applied' (word choice) and missing object — the student likely meant 'a bike' and 'ride' not 'write'. This is a sentence structure and vocabulary error falling under Sentence structure errors (ID 26) and Verb usage. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'a bike' and the correct verb 'ride' for bicycles; keep parallel structure with 'No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, and as a result I don't know how to ride one.'

× Heights used to be popular in my country, but at this moment I don't think most of the people are still in need of bike.

✓ Bicycles used to be popular in my country, but at the moment I don't think most people still need a bike.

Errors include wrong word 'Heights' (should be 'Bicycles'), unnatural phrase 'most of the people' (use 'most people'), incorrect article 'a bike' placement and word order. This is primarily Sentence structure errors (ID 26) and Singular and plural issue (ID 1). Suggestion: use the correct noun 'bicycles', simplify 'most people', and use 'need a bike' to express necessity.

× There are few. There are few bites I see, but it's not that popular anymore.

✓ There are few of them. I see a few bikes, but it's not that popular anymore.

Problems: 'There are few' is incomplete and ambiguous; 'bites' is a misspelling of 'bikes'. This is Singular and plural issue (ID 1) and Sentence structure errors (ID 26). Suggestion: say 'There are few of them' or better 'I see a few bikes' to clarify quantity and correct the spelling to 'bikes'.