Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your reply did not answer the question. For Part 1 you should respond directly with a topic sentence (yes/no) and add 1–2 short details. Keep it natural and concise, use linking words if you add details, and avoid asking the examiner a question. For example, briefly describe the bike, how often you used it and who gave it to you.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me when I was six, and I rode it almost every afternoon in the neighborhood. Because it was sturdy and easy to control, I learned to balance quickly and gained a lot of confidence.

제안: This answer is unclear and indirect. Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/It depends), then explain why using specific reasons and linking words (for example, because, however, for short trips). Keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences and give concrete examples (commuting, leisure, sport).

예시: It depends. Bikes are popular for short trips and exercise because many people use them to commute to nearby shops or parks. However, in big cities people often prefer cars or public transport for longer journeys due to traffic and weather.

× OK, So what kinds of?

✓ OK. So what kinds of bikes?

The original is an incomplete question missing the object; this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Adding the noun 'bikes' completes the question and making 'So' start a new sentence with a period improves clarity. Also capitalize consistently and remove extra comma. Suggestion: include the object you are asking about and punctuate properly.

× You should say, well, it depends.

✓ You should say, 'Well, it depends.'

This sentence is generally acceptable, but it's awkwardly punctuated. The issue here is not grammatical tense or agreement but presentation; however to follow the instructions only types from the list are used. Using reported-speech punctuation and capitalizing 'Well' is clearer. Suggestion: include appropriate quotation or reporting structure and correct punctuation.

× Depends on the occasions that I need to join.

✓ It depends on the occasions I need to attend.

The original lacks a subject and uses an inappropriate verb collocation ('join' is less natural with 'occasions'); this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Adding the subject 'It' and using the verb 'attend' makes the sentence grammatically complete and idiomatic. Suggestion: always include a subject for a clause and choose a verb that collocates with the noun (attend occasions/events).

× Alright, so.

✓ Alright, so...

This fragment is an incomplete clause and thus a sentence structure error (ID 26). Ellipsis or continuation is needed to show it is a trailing thought. Suggestion: complete the sentence or use ellipsis to indicate a pause rather than a full stop.