Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a slightly longer, more natural response: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Avoid one-word answers and informal fillers like just “Yeah.”

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels when I was seven, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon. Because it was light and easy to handle, I learned to balance on it quickly and felt very confident.

제안: Make the answer more natural and informative: state your opinion directly, then give specific reasons or examples using linking words (e.g., because, however, for example). Keep it concise (2–4 sentences).

예시: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or motorbikes for daily commuting. For example, public infrastructure favors cars, and there are few safe bike lanes, so cycling is uncommon in cities.

× I think bikes are not popular in my country.

✓ I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence uses a less natural negative form 'I think bikes are not popular...' which is grammatically acceptable but uncommon in spoken English; more natural is to put the negation on the matrix verb: 'I don't think...'. This change improves clarity and conversational tone. Suggestion: place the negative on the main verb ('do not think') rather than negating the subordinate clause.