Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense consistency and add a brief supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then give one or two specific reasons or a short example. Use linking words if you add details (e.g., because, so, although). Keep the answer to no more than five sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. However, I remember borrowing my friend’s bike sometimes to ride to the park, which I really enjoyed.

제안: Clarify your opinion with correct vocabulary and grammar, and give specific supporting details. State your opinion clearly, then explain why using accurate words (e.g., “use” or “ride,” not “bite”), and include examples or comparisons. Use linking words like “because” or “however.” Keep to under five sentences.

예시: I think bicycles are moderately popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many people ride bikes to markets or schools, but cars and motorbikes are still more common for longer journeys.

× No, I don't have a bike when I'm child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student's response should use past tense. 'Don't have' is present tense and 'I'm child' is ungrammatical: use the past simple 'didn't have' and the correct phrase 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: use past simple for past situations and include the article 'a' before 'child' and the verb 'was' for first person past.

× I think maybe yes, but not too much. People will take bite.

✓ I think maybe yes, but not too much. People often ride bikes.

The first sentence 'I think maybe yes, but not too much.' is conversationally acceptable but could be clearer; it uses present tense appropriately for a general opinion. The second sentence 'People will take bite.' contains several errors: 'will' implies future and is not appropriate for stating a general habit; 'take bite' is incorrect collocation—likely intended 'take bikes' or 'ride bikes'. Correct form for a habitual action is present simple: 'People often ride bikes.' Suggestion: use present simple to describe general habits and use the verb 'ride' with 'bikes'.