Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct grammar (use past simple: 'did not have'), avoid repetition, and be concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also replace unclear words ('bite') with the intended word ('bike' or 'biking'). Aim for natural phrasing and limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I preferred running and playing team sports such as football and cricket, so I rarely thought about cycling. Although I wanted a bike, my family couldn't buy one, so I never owned one.

제안: Use precise vocabulary and avoid inappropriate or incorrect words ('bisexual' is incorrect and likely a slip). Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting points (e.g., reasons for popularity or examples). Use linking words to connect ideas and finish the sentence. Keep answers natural and complete.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, when I was in fifth grade almost every child owned a bike because they are an affordable and convenient way to get around. However, I personally preferred team sports, so I didn't cycle much.

× No, I did not had a bike when I was a child because I I was used to running all the time.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because I was used to running all the time.

The auxiliary did requires the base form of the main verb (have), not the past form (had). Also remove the repeated 'I'. Suggestion: Use 'did not have' for simple past negative and avoid repeating words.

× I didn't like to bite that much so that's why I didn't had any kind of bicycle.

✓ I didn't like to bike that much so that's why I didn't have any kind of bicycle.

Two issues: 'didn't' requires the base verb form, so 'have' not 'had'. Also 'bite' is a spelling/word choice error; context indicates 'bike'. Suggestion: Use 'didn't have' and correct to 'bike'.

× I always wanted one but I didn't.

✓ I always wanted one, but I didn't get one.

The sentence 'I didn't' is incomplete without an object or verb. In context, add 'get one' to complete the idea. Maintain past tense.

× I didn't get any.

✓ I didn't get any.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable in past tense; no change needed. It correctly uses 'didn't' plus base verb 'get'.

× Indeed, they are popular.

✓ Indeed, they are popular.

This sentence is correct in present tense describing a general truth; no change needed.

× When I was a child in fifth grade EV, every boy had a bisexual and everybody loved to ride one.

✓ When I was a child in fifth grade, every boy had a bicycle and everybody loved to ride one.

Two errors: 'bisexual' is a wrong word choice; correct word is 'bicycle'. Also remove 'EV' which seems erroneous unless it is a proper noun; treated as extraneous. 'Had' is correct past tense. Suggestion: Use 'bicycle' for the vehicle.

× Every child had a dream of having a bike.

✓ Every child had a dream of having a bike.

Sentence is correct: 'every child' (singular) with 'had' is appropriate. No change needed.

× But uh, for me, I usually liked playing, uh, team sports like.

✓ But for me, I usually liked playing team sports.

The original sentence is incomplete and has filler words 'uh' and a trailing 'like' without an object. Remove fillers and the incomplete 'like' and end with 'team sports' to form a complete, grammatical sentence. Suggestion: If giving examples, follow 'like' with examples (for example, 'like football and cricket').