Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and repetition, and add one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Use past tense when talking about childhood and be specific about frequency or places to make the answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, I did. I loved riding my bike when I was a child because it felt freeing and relaxing. For example, I often rode to school and explored the streets around my neighborhood, usually three or four times a week. This helped me build confidence and stay active.

제안: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific observations and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'bikes', 'children', 'elderly'). Use linking words to organize ideas and correct grammar (plural forms, age expressions).

예시: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For instance, many elderly people ride bikes along the riverside for exercise, and children as young as five often ride in parks. In addition, cycling is a common and affordable way for many people to get around.

× Yes I do and I will I love I really love umm really enjoy riding a bike and sometime I I ride a bike to school and go and go to somewhere like near around my house and it it really, it really feel umm relaxing.

✓ Yes, I did. I loved it. I really enjoy riding a bike and sometimes I rode a bike to school or went to places near my house, and it really felt relaxing.

Multiple tense and time-expression problems: the examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so use past tense (did, loved, rode, went, felt). 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Also remove filler words and repeated words. Suggestion: decide the time frame first (past) and keep verbs consistent in that tense, and use correct adverbs (sometimes).

× Yeah, I think biker are very popular in the country because I can see the old people riding a bike around around to around the Riverside and the chill the child like they are brown, five years old to.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are very popular in the country because I can see old people riding bikes around the riverside and children, like those who are five years old, too.

Several agreement and word-choice issues: 'biker' (singular person) should be 'bikes' (plural noun) when talking about popularity of bicycles, or 'bikers are' if referring to people. Use 'are' with plural subject 'bikes' or 'bikers'. 'Old people' and 'children' must match plural nouns with plural verbs. Remove repeated words ('around around'). 'Riverside' should be lowercase unless a proper name. 'the chill the child like they are brown, five years old to' is unclear; corrected to 'children, like those who are five years old, too.' Suggestion: use plural subjects and verbs consistently, simplify the sentence, and check word choices for clarity.