Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and add one supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then briefly add a specific memory or reason. Use one or two linking words if needed and keep to under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to visit my friend who lived two streets away, and it was how I learned to be independent.

제안: Correct grammar (plural/singular agreement) and make the reason more specific with an example or comparison. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add a concrete supporting detail and a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example"). Keep the response natural and under five sentences.

예시: Yes, bicycles are popular in my country because they are cheap to use and help people save money on transport. For example, many students and market vendors ride bikes daily instead of taking buses.

× Yes, when I was a child, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike.

The sentence mixes past time reference 'when I was a child' with present tense 'have'. This is a tense consistency error. Use past tense 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: match the verb tense to the time expression (use 'had' for past periods).

× Yes, bicycle are popular in our country because it can save spending money.

✓ Yes, bicycles are popular in our country because they can save people money.

There are multiple issues: 'bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' to agree with 'are' (singular/plural issue). 'It can save spending money' has incorrect pronoun and awkward phrasing: use plural pronoun 'they' to match 'bicycles' and a clearer verb phrase 'save people money'. Also avoid 'spending money' here. Suggestion: pluralize nouns and ensure pronoun and verb agree; use natural collocations like 'save people money'. 'They can' is third person plural and agrees with 'bicycles'.