Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cách cải thiện: Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng (had/was), tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp. Thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu mạch lạc (ví dụ: “because”, “so”, “and”). Lưu ý phát âm từ dễ gây lẫn như “family/father” và tránh lặp từ như “the the” hoặc “some some”.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I often rode it to play with my friends and to go to the park, because it was an easy and fun way to get around. My father taught me how to ride, so I felt confident riding on my own.

제안: Cách cải thiện: Bắt đầu bằng một câu rõ ràng nêu ý kiến (Yes/No/Definitely). Sử dụng cấu trúc đúng (are popular / people usually travel / by bicycle) và rút gọn, tránh lặp từ như “going around going”. Thêm một hoặc hai lý do ngắn gọn, dùng liên từ thích hợp (for example, because, so) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể (học sinh, sinh viên).

예시: Yes, bicycles are very popular in Vietnam. Many students use them to get to school because they are cheap and convenient, especially for young people who cannot drive. For example, I often saw children cycling together on the way to class.

× Oh sure, I have a bicycle when I was young for me to going around playing with my friends, also going to the park and showing some some games there with my families when my father is the the man, the only man who touched me to ride a bike.

✓ Oh sure, I had a bicycle when I was young to go around playing with my friends, and also to go to the park and show some games there with my family, because my father was the one who taught me to ride a bike.

The student mixed present tense 'have' with past time marker 'when I was young', so use past tense 'had'. Incorrect verb form 'to going' should be the infinitive 'to go'. Redundant words 'some some' and plural 'families' should be singular 'family'. 'Is the the man, the only man who touched me to ride a bike' is ungrammatical and unclear; use 'was the one who taught me to ride a bike'. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past events, use correct infinitive after 'to', avoid redundancy, use 'taught' for learning activities.

× Oh, for me it is definitely because in Vietnam we are usually going around going to school by vehicles bicycle because it is very convenient for them to running around when they are just too young to get a license and it is more easy to afford a bike.

✓ Oh, for me it definitely is because in Vietnam we usually go to school by bicycle since it is very convenient for children who are too young to get a license, and it is easier to afford a bike.

This sentence incorrectly uses continuous 'are usually going around going to school' instead of simple present 'usually go'. 'Vehicles bicycle' is wrong word order; use 'by bicycle'. 'Convenient for them to running around' mixes infinitive and -ing; use 'convenient for children to get around' or 'convenient for children who are too young'. 'More easy' is incorrect comparative; use 'easier'. Also replace vague 'them' with 'children' for clarity. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions, correct preposition 'by', use infinitive or noun phrases correctly, and use standard comparative forms.