Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Focus on answering the examiner's question directly and avoid repeating or paraphrasing the question. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct pronunciation and avoid stuttering. Keep your response to no more than five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was about seven. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. Because my parents encouraged outdoor play, I rode it almost every day after school, which helped me become more confident and independent.

제안: Don't repeat the examiner's question; give a direct opinion first and then support it with reasons and examples. Use linking words such as 'because', 'however', or 'for example' to make your answer coherent. Aim for specific details (who uses bikes, where, and why) and keep it within five sentences.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. For example, many students and office workers use bikes for short commutes because traffic is heavy and it's cheaper than driving. However, cycling is more common in flat areas with good bike lanes, while hilly regions see fewer riders.

× Did you have a bike when you we we are were a child.

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The sentence contains redundant and incorrect words ('we we are were') that break the sentence structure and verb usage. The correct past simple question asks about possession in childhood using 'Did you have' plus the time clause 'when you were a child'. Remove the extra words and keep 'were' for the past state. Also add a question mark at the end. Suggestion: keep clauses concise and use only one correct past form ('were') for 'you' in the time expression.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is already grammatically correct. It uses the present simple to ask about a general opinion or fact. No changes needed. Suggestion: ensure punctuation is tidy (single question mark) and avoid trailing spaces.