Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, tense consistency and clarity. Begin with a clear topic sentence in the past tense (because the question asks about childhood), correct the verb forms, and give one brief supporting detail. Use linking words if needed. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 4–5 short sentences).

예시: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I used to rent bikes with my friends every weekend, which was a fun way to explore the neighborhood.

제안: Clarify the main idea and use appropriate vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence saying whether bikes are popular, then add one or two specific reasons or examples using correct terms (e.g., mountain biking, cycling for commuting). Use linking words (because, for example) and avoid invented phrases like “barrier energetic” or “undoing bike.” Keep sentences clear and natural.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and recreation. For example, there are many bike lanes in cities, and mountain biking is also common in rural areas.

× No, I don't have a bike but I do renting with my friends every weekend.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike, but I rented one with my friends every weekend.

Original sentence mixes present tense ('don't have') with past context 'when you were a child' and uses incorrect form 'do renting'. Use past simple for habitual actions in the past: 'didn't have' and 'rented'. Replace 'do renting' with 'rented'. Also add 'one' after 'rented' for clarity.

× Yes, my country is very popular and barrier energetic for the hiking bike or undoing bike every day.

✓ Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country and many people ride mountain bikes or road bikes every day.

Original sentence has multiple issues: incorrect subject ('my country is very popular' should refer to bicycles), wrong word choice ('barrier energetic' and 'undoing bike' are not correct), and awkward structure. Revise to a clear subject and verbs: 'bicycles are very popular' and specify types 'mountain bikes or road bikes'. Use 'ride' to describe the action rather than 'energetic'.