Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Use correct tense and a clear topic sentence; keep it concise and natural. Start with past tense (I had) and follow with one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unnecessary words and correct grammar (e.g., 'I did have' vs 'I had').

예시: I had a bike when I was a child. It was rainbow-colored with fluorescent details, and I loved riding it to the park every weekend because it was lightweight and easy to steer.

제안: Respond with a clear topic sentence and then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (singular/plural, prepositions) and simplify phrasing. Use linking words like 'because' or 'especially' correctly.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially during the summer. For example, in my coastal city many people ride bicycles to the beach because the roads are flat and traffic is lighter during the season.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child and it was a rainbow colored bicycle with fluorescent details.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and it was a rainbow-colored bicycle with fluorescent details.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do have' with past time phrase 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Also, 'rainbow colored' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before a noun: 'rainbow-colored.' Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past events and hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, I think that bicycle are much popular in during the summer time and especially in my city, because in the on the seaside and everybody get around with bicycle during summer.

✓ Yes, I think that bicycles are very popular during the summer, especially in my city, because we live on the seaside and everybody gets around by bicycle in summer.

Multiple errors: 'bicycle are' has plural subject/verb mismatch — use 'bicycles are' or 'cycling is'. 'much popular' is incorrect collocation; use 'very popular.' Remove extra prepositions 'in during' and wrong article 'the on the seaside' — say 'on the seaside' or 'by the seaside.' 'everybody get' needs third-person singular verb 'gets.' 'with bicycle' is wrong preposition and article; use 'by bicycle' or 'on bicycles.' Also simplify 'in summer' or 'during the summer.' Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree, use correct adjective modifiers ('very popular'), choose correct prepositions ('during', 'on the seaside', 'by bicycle'), and maintain consistent pluralization for count nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 27