Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and use correct tense and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, give one or two specific supporting details, and use linking words for coherence. Correct errors: use past tense (“I had”), adjective order and article (“a white bike”), correct verb form (“I used it”), and avoid unnecessary words. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small white bike with training wheels, and I used it every weekend to ride around my neighborhood. I remember practicing until I could ride without help, which made me feel very proud.

제안: Answer directly and provide specific reasons or observations. Use clear linking words (for example, 'however', 'because', 'since') and avoid filler words like 'umm' or 'uh'. Use present/past tense correctly and give concrete examples or comparisons to support your point. Keep answers concise and natural (2–3 sentences).

예시: Yes, bicycles were very popular in 2020 because many people preferred cycling for exercise and short trips during the pandemic. However, recently car use and ride-hailing services have increased, so fewer people choose to cycle nowadays.

× Yes, I do have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the pronoun and verb should reflect past time. 'Do have' is present; use past tense 'had' to match timeframe. Suggestion: use past simple for past possession: 'I had a bike.'

× When I was a child it was color white and I using it in our country every weekend.

✓ When I was a child it was white and I used it in our country every weekend.

Several issues: 'color white' is incorrect adjective order and phrasing — use 'white' directly; 'I using' lacks auxiliary or correct tense: should be past simple 'I used' to match 'When I was a child'; also 'in our country every weekend' is acceptable but 'around the neighborhood' or 'here' may be more natural. Suggestion: simplify to 'When I was a child it was white and I used it every weekend.'

× Yes, biking is one of the popular activities in our country, umm, during the year 2020.

✓ Yes, biking was one of the popular activities in our country during 2020.

The sentence references a specific past period ('during the year 2020'), so the verb should be past tense 'was' rather than present 'is'. Using present creates a tense mismatch. Suggestion: match tense to time expression: 'was one of the popular activities during 2020.'

× But now I don't know the reason uh, why bicycles are not popular anymore.

✓ But now I don't know the reason why bicycles are not popular anymore.

Main problem is sentence fluency: remove the extra comma before 'why' and filler 'uh' in formal responses. The tense 'are not popular anymore' is acceptable for current situation. Suggestion: say 'But now I don't know why bicycles are not popular anymore.'