Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct the grammar and give a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with a linking word. Use past tense and avoid repetition. For example, say you owned a bike, mention its type or a memory, and link the ideas with 'and' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples, using linking words like 'because' or 'however'. Avoid vague words like 'a little' and fix repetition. Mention who uses bikes and where to make it concrete.

예시: Yes, bikes are somewhat popular in my country, especially among students and delivery workers because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. However, many people prefer cars for longer distances due to safety and weather concerns.

× Yes, I have a bike when I when I a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' and omitted the verb 'was' for the time clause; the question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be past tense. Use 'had' for possession in the past and include the verb 'was' in the subordinate clause: 'when I was a child'. Also removed duplicated words. Suggestion: match tense to time reference and check for accidental repetition.

× Yes, a little in the in my country.

✓ Yes, they are somewhat popular in my country.

The student's reply is fragmented and missing a subject and proper adjective/adverb placement. 'A little' is informal and unclear; using 'somewhat popular' or 'a little popular' is more grammatical. Include the subject 'they' (referring to 'bikes') and a verb 'are' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: always include subject and verb and choose clearer modifiers (somewhat, a little, quite).