Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more direct and natural, correct tense and reduce hesitation. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating words and fillers (e.g., "uh").

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I rarely used it because my house was close to the train station, so I usually took public transport instead.

제안: Answer directly and organize supporting details with linking words. Use specific examples and correct word order. Avoid repetition and finish the sentence clearly.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. For example, many of my high school classmates and even some teachers commute by bike because it is cheap and convenient for short distances.

× Yes, I'd had a bike when I was a kid, but I don't really use that because my, uh, my house is near, was near station so I don't really have to use a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a kid, but I don't really use it now because my house was near the station, so I didn't have to use a bike.

The original uses 'I'd had' (past perfect) unnecessarily; simple past 'I had' is appropriate for a past possession. Also tense consistency: when contrasting past and present, use 'I had' for past and 'I don't really use it now' for present. 'Was near station' misses the article 'the' and should be 'the station'. Replace the vague pronoun 'that' with 'it' for the bike. Finally, adjust the final clause to past tense 'didn't have to' if referring to the past reason for not using a bike, or keep present 'don't have to' if still true; here corrected to past to match 'was near'. Suggestions: use simple past for past facts, keep tense consistency, use articles with singular countable nouns, and use appropriate pronouns.'},{