Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct grammar and word order, be more specific with details, and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a couple of specific supporting details (when/where, who with, how you felt) and a brief concluding remark. Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I usually rode it to school and sometimes visited relatives in the afternoons. I loved that bike because it was bright red and fast, so I felt free riding around the neighborhood. Unfortunately, it broke when I was about twelve and we couldn’t fix it.

제안: Fix grammar errors and use clearer vocabulary and linking expressions. Begin with a direct opinion, then support it with specific reasons or examples (who uses bikes, where they are used, and why). Use correct pronouns and plural forms and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Almost everyone owns one, especially in villages where people use them to travel to school, markets and to visit friends. They are cheap to run and convenient on narrow roads, so many families prefer bikes over cars.

× Yes, I used have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child.

The phrase requires the structure 'used to + base verb' to describe a past habitual action. 'Used have' is incorrect because the infinitive marker 'to' is missing and the base verb should be 'have'. Use 'used to have' for past habitual situations.

× I usually my ride my bike to school and visit some of my realities.

✓ I usually rode my bike to school and visited some of my relatives.

The sentence describes a past habitual action, so past tense verbs are required. 'Usually' with a past context takes past simple 'rode' and 'visited'. Also 'my ride' is incorrectly ordered and 'realities' is the wrong word; the correct word is 'relatives'. Ensure correct word order and vocabulary.

× I really like that bike but it was broken long time ago.

✓ I really liked that bike, but it was broken a long time ago.

The sentence mixes present 'like' with past context; since the bike no longer exists, 'liked' (past) is appropriate. Also include the article 'a' in the phrase 'a long time ago' for correct idiomatic expression.

× Mines are very popular in my country, almost every of us own a bike and we we ride a bike together everywhere around the village and to school and to visit each other.

✓ Bikes are very popular in my country; almost every one of us owns a bike and we ride our bikes together everywhere around the village, to school, and when we visit each other.

Several issues: 'Mines' is incorrect; use 'Bikes' or 'They' to refer to bikes. 'Almost every of us' should be 'almost every one of us' or 'almost all of us'. Subject-verb agreement: 'every one of us owns' requires singular verb 'owns'. Repetition 'we we' is an error. Use plural possessive 'our bikes' when referring to bikes owned by the group. Also list items with commas and use 'when we visit each other' for clarity.