Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy, fluency and clarity. Use past tense consistently, remove fillers (uh, umm), correct word choice (likely → lovely), and keep response concise (1–3 sentences). Add one supporting detail with a linking phrase.

예시: Yes, I had a lovely bike when I was a child. It was red and had a small fish sticker on the frame, which made it easy to recognise when I rode with friends.

제안: Reduce hesitations and organize the answer: start with a direct topic sentence, then give clear reasons using linking words (for example, because, since, therefore). Use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “health-conscious”, “commuting”) and avoid trailing off. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, bikes are more popular now than in the past. For example, many people choose cycling for commuting because they are more health-conscious and want a cheaper, faster way to get around the city.

× Yes, of course I have a likely bike.

✓ Yes, of course I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Have' is present tense; change to 'had'. Also 'likely' is incorrect in this context and should be removed. Suggestion: use 'had' to match past timeframe and avoid inappropriate modifiers like 'likely' here.

× It was red and cute and has a small umm fish on it.

✓ It was red and cute and had a small fish on it.

The sentence begins in past tense ('It was') so the second verb should also be past tense for consistency. 'Has' is present tense; change to 'had'. Remove fillers like 'umm'. Ensure adjectives and verbs agree in tense: 'was' and 'had'.

× Well, uh, nowadays, yes, I think, uh, it's more popular than, uh, in the past, uh, because, uh, people for, uh, being healthier and uh, fitter, uh, prefer to ride, but.

✓ Well, nowadays I think bicycles are more popular than in the past because people prefer to ride them to be healthier and fitter.

Multiple issues: inconsistent and redundant fillers removed for clarity. 'It's more popular than in the past' should specify plural 'bicycles' or 'they' to match subject; 'it's' (it is) is vague—use 'bicycles are' or 'they are'. The phrase 'people for being healthier and fitter' is ungrammatical; correct structure is 'people prefer to ride them to be healthier and fitter' or 'people ride bicycles to be healthier and fitter.' Also ensure present tense used correctly for general statements: 'think', 'are more popular', 'prefer'. Include object 'them' after 'ride'.