Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct grammar and tense, give a clear topic sentence and a brief supporting detail. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a direct answer (‘No, I didn’t’) then add one specific detail (why or when you got a bike). Keep it to 1–3 sentences and use a linking word if you add a reason.

예시: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I only bought my first bike when I was 28 because I started cycling to work to save money and exercise.

제안: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear opinion, then add a specific supporting detail using a linking word (for example, ‘because’ or ‘especially’). Include one concrete example or reason to make the answer more informative.

예시: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among younger people, because many students and young professionals use them for short commutes and to avoid traffic.

× No, I don't didn't have.

✓ No, I didn't have.

The student used both present auxiliary 'do' and past auxiliary 'did' together, which is incorrect. Use only the past tense auxiliary 'did' with the base verb: 'didn't have'. Suggestion: Form negatives in the past by using 'did not' or 'didn't' + base verb (have).

× I only have bike when I was 28 years old.

✓ I only had a bike when I was 28 years old.

The time clause 'when I was 28 years old' sets the action in the past, so the main verb should be past tense 'had', not present 'have'. Also the noun 'bike' requires an article 'a' (article error/22). Suggestion: Use past tense for past time references and include appropriate articles: 'I only had a bike when I was 28 years old.'

× Bikes are popular in my country, especially for the young younger generations.

✓ Bikes are popular in my country, especially among the younger generations.

Two issues: 'young younger generations' repeats and misuses comparative 'younger' without contrast; use a single adjective 'younger'. Also the preposition is better as 'among' when referring to groups. Suggestion: Use 'among the younger generations' to indicate popularity within that demographic.