Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I did.”), then add one or two specific supporting details using correct tense and linking words. Avoid repetition and fillers. For example, say when you had the bike, what type it was, and one specific activity or memory. Use past simple consistently for past events and check subject-verb agreement.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I rode it every day during the summer. For example, my friends and I would cycle to the park and race along the lake path, which was great fun.

제안: Provide a clear opinion and then give specific reasons linked with logical connectors. Begin with a direct topic sentence (e.g. “I don’t think they are very popular.”), then add two concise reasons introduced by linking words such as “because” or “mainly because”. Avoid trailing off and fill pauses. Give a brief example or consequence to support your point.

예시: I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country nowadays because cities are overcrowded and traffic conditions are unsafe for cyclists. For example, many people prefer motorbikes or cars since public infrastructure like bike lanes is limited, so cycling is less common.

× Yes, absolutely. I had a bug when I was when I were a child, when I was a child and uh, I play all the lines during summer with my bike.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I had a bike when I was a child, and I played outside all day during the summer with my bike.

Errors: incorrect word 'bug' instead of 'bike' is likely vocabulary, but grammar issues: 'were' used instead of 'was' (past tense subject-verb agreement for first/third person singular) and 'play' present tense used where past tense is required. Correction addresses: use 'was' with singular subject 'I' in past tense (Grammar Problem Type 5: Past tense issue and 27: Subject-verb agreement), and change 'play' to 'played' to match past narrative. Also clarified 'all the lines' to 'outside all day' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: when narrating past events, keep verbs in past tense consistently; use 'was' with I/he/she/it and use past form of main verbs.

× No, I don't think so. Uh, these days speaking due to very high population in the cities and as uh.

✓ No, I don't think so. These days, because of the very high population in the cities, people rarely use bikes.

Errors: sentence fragment lacking a main verb and incorrect phrasing 'these days speaking due to' is ungrammatical (Sentence structure errors and Present tense issues). The original switches to an incomplete clause; correction provides a complete present-tense statement appropriate for current general truth. Suggestion: ensure each sentence has a subject and main verb; use 'because of' or 'due to' followed by a noun phrase, and keep present simple for general statements.