Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve naturalness and coherence by starting with a direct topic sentence, adding a brief specific detail, and varying vocabulary. Keep responses concise (max 5 sentences). For example, say you biked regularly, mention who you biked with and what you enjoyed, and use a linking phrase to add a little detail.

예시: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day with my friends around the neighborhood, especially after school. We would race to the park and sometimes explore quiet side streets, which I enjoyed because it felt adventurous.

제안: The content is relevant but the answer is disfluent and incomplete. Improve by giving a clear topic sentence, then provide a concise reason with a specific example. Avoid hesitations and unclear references; name the campaign or explain briefly if unsure. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

예시: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. This is partly because the government ran a high-profile campaign encouraging cycling to improve health and reduce traffic. For example, they built new bike lanes and organized community cycling events, which encouraged many people to start riding regularly.

× I used to bike when I was young with my friends around my neighborhood every day.

✓ I used to ride a bike around my neighborhood with my friends every day when I was young.

The original sentence uses 'bike' as a verb which is acceptable but less natural here; more natural phrasing is 'ride a bike'. Also word order is awkward: time phrase 'when I was young' fits better at the end. No tense change is needed because 'used to' correctly expresses past habitual action. Suggest using 'ride a bike' and placing phrases in a clearer order for natural English.

× I think bike are quite popular in my country because the king uh, because where was the R right for that campaign which promoted with.

✓ I think bikes are quite popular in my country because of a royal campaign that promoted cycling.

Several issues: 'bike are' has a subject-verb agreement error—use plural noun 'bikes' with plural verb 'are'. The original sentence also has word order and extraneous filler words making it ungrammatical. 'Because of a royal campaign that promoted cycling' is a concise, grammatical way to express the likely reason. The corrected sentence preserves present-tense opinion and supplies proper noun/verb forms and preposition use ('because of').