Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally good: it directly answers the question, includes supporting details, and shows personal feeling. To improve, make the response more concise and natural by removing filler words (e.g., 'cause', 'right now'), correct small tense/register issues, and avoid repeating phrases ('used to' twice). Use one clear topic sentence followed by two specific supporting details and a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle and rode it almost every day because it made me feel free and let me explore my neighborhood. However, I no longer own it, so I plan to buy another one soon to get back into cycling.

제안: Your response attempts honesty but is too hesitant and lacks clear structure and specific supporting details. Remove fillers ('uh', 'umm', 'right?'), give one clear topic sentence, and add 1–2 concrete reasons or examples (e.g., traffic conditions, infrastructure, climate, or cultural habits). Use linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example', 'therefore') to make your answer coherent and natural.

예시: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because there is limited cycling infrastructure and busy traffic in most cities. For example, there are few dedicated bike lanes and many people prefer cars or motorcycles for convenience.

× I used to ride it almost every day 'cause I really enjoyed the process of being free and being able to ride wherever I want and whenever I want.

✓ I used to ride it almost every day because I really enjoyed the feeling of being free and being able to ride wherever and whenever I wanted.

The sentence mixes past habitual context with present tense verbs. 'Used to' and 'enjoyed' indicate past, so verbs referring to ability and time should be in past tense ('wanted'). Also, 'the process of being free' is unnatural; 'the feeling of being free' is more natural. Use 'because' instead of informal ' 'cause' for formal accuracy.

× But unfortunately, right now I don't have it and in the nearest future I plan to buy it.

✓ But unfortunately, right now I don't have one and in the near future I plan to buy one.

'It' is awkward here because the student previously mentioned 'a bicycle' generally; 'one' is clearer. 'In the nearest future' is not idiomatic; use 'in the near future.' This corrects prepositional and phrase usage to match present context.

× To tell the truth, I don't think that in my country we have a bicycle culture, uh, because, uh, I think that, umm, in our region, we don't have a lot of bicycle, right?

✓ To tell the truth, I don't think that in my country we have a bicycle culture, because in our region we don't have a lot of bicycles.

'A lot of bicycle' is incorrect: 'bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' when referring to many. Also removed filler words and tag question 'right?' for a concise grammatical correction. Kept tense and meaning intact.