Bike— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer the question directly and naturally. The student simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a short topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two brief supporting details (use linking words like "and" or "because"). Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to a park near my home. It helped me learn balance and made playing outside with friends more fun.

제안: Improve grammar, specificity and add a linking word for clarity. Use a clear topic sentence, then provide specific reasons with brief examples. Avoid vague phrases like "it is popular"—say who uses bikes and in what situations.

예시: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among students and commuters. They are an affordable way to travel short distances, which helps people save money on transport, and they also serve as a convenient form of exercise for daily fitness.

× Yes, it is popular in our country because we can save money through it and it is a way to exercise.

✓ Yes, they are popular in our country because we can save money by using them and they are a way to exercise.

The subject 'bikes' is plural so verbs and pronouns referring to it must be plural ('they are' not 'it is'). Also 'save money through it' is unnatural; use the preposition 'by' with the gerund phrase 'by using them'. Change 'it is a way to exercise' to 'they are a way to exercise' to agree with the plural subject. Suggestions: ensure pronouns and verbs agree in number with the noun, use 'by + -ing' to express means, and match demonstratives/pronouns to plural nouns.